SENTENCE 1
His sentence:
Carlo could not get enough…the silence…the floating…seeing his mother’s face in the billowing white clouds as he soared to earth.
from Angels and Demons by Dan Brown.
The disconnected ellipsis emulates the dream-like state that Carlo is in as he experiences skydiving.
My sentece:
Bill could not stand it anymore…the torment…the pain…feeling helpless as he watched the prisoner of war tortured.
Friday, September 25, 2009
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